martes, 25 de enero de 2011

Descriptions of the pictures: 

This is brat pitt with angelina jolie and 2 children. They  go to visit the city and go to visit the mother of brat pitt, the grandmum of the children. The children are adopted. They are a family very funny because brat pitt and angelina jolie have children very small and very beautiful.


This is shrek with the three sons and his wife. Shrek and fiona are looking after their babis. This family is very funny because they have his three children. Two boys and une girl. The girl is beetwin the boys. This is the family of Shrek.


They are the protagonists of the new TV series, El BARO. This series is Spanish. The names of protagonist are Mario Casas, Blanca Suarez, Irene Montalá and Juanjo Artero. They are on a boat and they taking photos with magazine. They are the protagonist of this picture and of the TV series.  

1 comentario:

  1. Hello Blanca!
    1st PICTURE- The last sentence- They are NOT-une BUT-a.You need to re-structure your last sentence because it's not clear.

    2nd PICTURE- NOT-three sons BUT- his three children. NOT- look the babys BUT Shrek and Fiona are looking after their babies.

    Look at the end of the paragraph you have some spelling mistakes.

    3rd PICTURE-they are the protagonists!NOT-making photos BUT-taking photos

    Try to be more accurate, good effort!

    Danielle and Asun

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